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I danced in the seasons
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 10:41:14 PM in AEST
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I did the little girl dance
in meadows of sunflowers
escaping into my fantasy
daises round my feet.
I did the teen coming into my own dance
the world before me
dreams not realized
wind at my back
feet never really grounded.
I did the grown woman dance
life a bit more complicated
but always an adventure
round the next corner
foot -loose fancy free
feet leaving dust behind me.
Iv done the happy dance
joyous and wild
not caring who saw
smile bright.
Iv done the mournful dance
black dress,black veil,hidden face
misplaced tears,heart swollen
tears free flowing,broken.
I danced in the seasons
and tonight I shall not dance
no beat fits right
moments of stillness
for there is a time and season
even for feet to be still.
Michelle C Hamlin
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shelby
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Re: I danced in the seasons
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 11:00:59 PM AEST
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Aw, you should dance anyway.
Lovely writing, my dear.
Thank you for a great read. |
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Re: I danced in the seasons
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 8th January 2014 @ 06:58:08 AM AEST
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Beautiful. And all as true as the deepest philosophies. Thank you for stepping out on this site, tonight.
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Re: I danced in the seasons
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 07:02:10 PM AEST
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this is beautiful and so true,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I danced in the seasons
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 23rd August 2014 @ 07:27:42 AM AEST
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Very well done, Shelby. I like the path and the descriptions. A truly enjoyable read.
Invierno |
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Re: I danced in the seasons
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 24th May 2018 @ 11:03:58 PM AEST
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I loved this Shelby....
Truly!!!! |
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