|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
lost keys
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 07:22:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
|
the cold drizzle
consistently
unforgiving
it's deceptive
so I stop
counting
worn now
around wrist
and neck
maybe
a patina
of desperation
unlocking
poems
of sacred space
I have
no facts
of open doors.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2013-12-31 19:22:15]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: lost keys
(User Rating: 1 )
by saramic on
Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 12:10:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Shines with a sheen of inspiration, lines such as 'a patina of desperation....unlocking poems of sacred space'. Enjoyed searching for the key to this poem. |
|
|
Re: lost keys
(User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 09:53:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
An intriguing read I must say. To wrap my mind around the point is what I attempt: and brilliantly it is written in such a way that the answer is revealed evermore with each reading,
Deidra |
|
|
Re: lost keys
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Saturday, 4th January 2014 @ 06:05:27 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Unlocking poems of sacred space.......Life in continuum until a key is found or a state of being that enables the flow of creativity.There is a breath of fresh air in your humility and the carefully chosen words that effectively connect and a peace in a communicated truth and understanding.
|
|
|
Re: lost keys
(User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on
Friday, 24th January 2014 @ 10:35:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I still love your poems. They are fresh and original and literate. I wish you would think about joining my little group at http:www.verse-virtual.com. Please take a look and see if it's of interest to you. It's free. my email is ff@verse-virtual.com. Hope all is well and a happy new year -- with keys. --FH (David Firestone Feinberg |
|
|
Re: lost keys
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 10:36:05 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this poem breathes, hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
