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She
Contributed by
Autumn101
on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 01:18:07 PM in AEST
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She sent me a photo
Of herself tonight
Beautifully dressed, - surrounds
So clean, so bright
She sent it to my cellphone
I looked at it a while
Pictured there on a tiny screen
She should of seen my smile
Captured lovely, dressed in blue
Its hard to guess her height
With just a picture one inch tall
And me, with my failing sight
She may be taller in real life
I hope so for her sake
Or hows she going to hold knife & fork
And eat from a great big plate
All I know is she writes me
Like an angel on gossamer wing
Her words alight like butterflies
And make mine own heart sing
Copyright ©
Autumn101
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Re: She
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by alicewhite on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 01:27:52 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL
would love this to have been about me , so lovely, she is so lucky, your words are wonderful
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Re: She
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by thistle_and_fern on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 03:11:12 PM AEST
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WOW
Is all I can say to this Mr Autumn
She does sound lovely.
Welcome to YPDC
Am anticipating more poems from you and cant wait to read more.
You have a gift for words
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Re: She
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 08:48:54 PM AEST
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Very very nice. I really enjoyed this and like it a lot. Can relate to it very well.
Thank you and  to YPDC. Enjoy the ride.
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Re: She
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 24th May 2018 @ 11:08:23 PM AEST
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| Truly wonderful!!!! |
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