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Sea Treasure
Contributed by
saramic
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Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 07:32:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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A bridge
too far
Across dark night
Seas that separate
By time and space alone.
Sagely souls cast adrift
Tossed in atavistic mists
vessels of blood and bone.
From Circean sinking saved
by parting of waves
deep in Poseidon.
Brought together , enclaved
In arc of rainbow tears
the white lie that saves
seeking
For sun-gold hymn
Aspiring for promised future
Of moon’s silver
in Him
Her labour of Life Divine
a diamond mind
2011
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saramic
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2013-12-31 07:32:37]
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Re: Sea Treasure
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by Voyager on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 07:36:40 AM AEST
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Like the diamond and the sun-gold in your poem, your every word shines. Radiant, brilliant are some words that come to mind. Mystically charged, cryptically hid yet to a seer's eye revealed the esoteric sense.
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Re: Sea Treasure
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st January 2014 @ 03:03:36 AM AEST
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I felt magic while reading this,incredible verse.
Happy New Year!
Michelle |
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