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Alchemy

Contributed by saramic on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 07:22:21 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

What spell cast the soul down from empyrean gold to earthly mould of brass
Knuckling it down in hell’s kitchen heat , to earn nickels crass
Papering with lucre filthy holes in heart starving chill
Unfilled by food that will feed on flesh, bones and blood, hunger that is death
Uncovered by roofs torn by tempus fugit the mind stopping still
Undone by loose reins enslavement of living - broken the will
Until such time as when the sea rusts the iron fetters, the soiled seed sprouts
Until such time as when the fire melts the crusts, the air freed of smoke
Until the ethereal real becomes, releasing the diamond from stone
Ages unchained no longer by spell of time and space
Matter transformed.

2/4/12

Copyright Â© saramic ... [ 2013-12-31 07:22:21]
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Re: Alchemy (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 07:28:01 AM AEST
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Wow! simply wow! First of all, an epic beginning:

"What spell cast the soul down from empyrean gold to earthly mould of brass"

paradie lost indeed! Big time. The entire poem flows so nicely and the rhyme and rhythm - unparalleled!

The closing lines are inspired and awe-inspiring. Its the white-script of truth itself, humanity must awake indeed and claim its true destiny.

"Until such time as when the fire melts the crusts, the air freed of smoke
Until the ethereal real becomes, releasing the diamond from stone
Ages unchained no longer by spell of time and space
Matter transformed."

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