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~When winter talked~
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 12:46:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I heard her talk to me
harsh voiced
then soft whispers.
Her chatter made no sense
her mood cast a shadow
a shadow that stilled my heart.
I felt her, and I melted
turned inside out
then froze just like her
solid and crystal
turned gray-blue
then melted again
into a reflective puddle.
The wind blew
and caused the reflection to ripple
and I could see,
moments of calm before the storms
mood cast,shadows falling
daylight fading into night.
It is in the stillness of the eve
blue-black conversation
just above a wind whisper
silenced the heart for a moment
and I spoke
when winter talked.
Michelle C Hamlin
12-30-2013
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shelby
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2013-12-31 00:46:13]
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Re: ~When winter talked~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 06:09:52 AM AEST
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| Brrrrreautiful! |
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Re: ~When winter talked~
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by saramic on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 11:03:53 AM AEST
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| Crisp like the winter air and as refreshing! good pace and content! |
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Re: ~When winter talked~
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by ming on
Tuesday, 31st December 2013 @ 04:45:08 PM AEST
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| Loved this. Saw double meaning which I adore. |
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Re: ~When winter talked~
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 1st January 2014 @ 04:51:06 AM AEST
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Wow! Every colour, feeling, physical aspect of Winter was personified, brought to life...a very elemental feel to it....the gods of nature coming to the forefront. Excellent write.
And the ending conveying that Winter has hegemony with its legions and allies.
It is in the stillness of the eve
blue-black conversation
just above a wind whisper
silenced the heart for a moment
and I spoke
when winter talked.
I felt a sense of hush there. Nice. |
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Re: ~When winter talked~
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 05:34:46 PM AEST
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| truly beautiful!!!! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~When winter talked~
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 24th May 2018 @ 11:10:09 PM AEST
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Truly beautiful.
This is the kind of poetry I love.
Absolutely wonderful! |
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