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Oceanic Desire
Contributed by
Ikada
on
Saturday, 28th December 2013 @ 12:43:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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When the tides draw close, I fear not,
For the sea is what my heart so wants.
To the depths of the ocean I’m hastily brought,
And no more do I want; - this is what I sought.
For each step I draw; each foot I step,
I draw closer to awe, no more need I prep.
For I’ve reached my desire; my goal; my aim,
No more need I worry, about what was shame.
For it lies in the past, in the future I dwell,
Lying far out, at last, deep in the swell.
As I recall my thoughts, my memories, my woes,
I take one last breath, to the bottom I go,
The farther I swim, the further I fall;
The future looks grim but the weather feels warm.
Deep down I inhale, I’m breathing in death,
Closer I come to my very last breath,
I’m drifting away, and further I fall,
I’m drifting away, no more need I bawl.
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Ikada
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2013-12-28 12:43:46]
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Re: Oceanic Desire
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by Banjosandwitch on
Saturday, 28th December 2013 @ 01:19:35 PM AEST
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| not my cup of tea but well written don't die though |
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Re: Oceanic Desire
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by lisamary on
Saturday, 28th December 2013 @ 02:29:59 PM AEST
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I understand the meaning of this as ive been their myself.
Very well written. |
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Re: Oceanic Desire
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by JimKoz on
Saturday, 28th December 2013 @ 04:33:10 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this piece. Reminds me of some things that I've written. |
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