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spiritualism

Contributed by vanders on Friday, 27th December 2013 @ 05:20:43 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual



As we start to awaken the emotions brake-in, Its like a synergy of reality, Like a synthesise of abnormality, Our brains sells start to awaken are we the forsaken? Atoms and neurons its all the same once rain comes after comes is sunshine again only to be hit buy rain again its all the same, Electrically our brains resiving it frame buy frame, Who is to blame? Previous life times ware we committed some crimes, We are meant to suffer and resist the temptation of this worlds forsaken nature, So that when our time comes we can reflect on how we have done, And then when time is spent we come out of this stratisfear into a slightly better place, That has less fear and is less severe, As long as we don't fall or and splatter, We will all begin slowly to clime the ladder passing though a multitude or life times, Until we reach the top ware we can live with the cream of the crop, And what is at the top? A world so nice and kind a different type of human kind with no disease or illness, no poverty, no crimes against humanity no deceit, manipulation or corruption, A place ware every one is wealthy.

Lets face it, If every one in the world was wealthy, there would be nobody left because most people in this world are driven buy anger and hate!




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Re: spiritualism (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 27th December 2013 @ 10:31:44 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking work of art.
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emy


Re: spiritualism (User Rating: 1 )
by thistle_and_fern on Saturday, 28th December 2013 @ 04:06:07 AM AEST
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Well thought out

Agree it is thought provoking




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