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Lone.
Contributed by
JimKoz
on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 10:52:49 PM in AEST
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I'm alone.
That's okay, I don't mind.
Most of the time.
Miss you.
The days we spent in love.
Now that it's over.
Memories I try to shove.
Broken heart.
By far, the worst kind.
Broken bones mend, but this pain stays prolonged by spell bind.
Continuous anxiety.
The whole social scene is not my kind.
To ease this I keep myself confined.
Creating music.
Art constantly flows, barely play shows.
Stage fright, this I wish to dispose.
Everyone dies.
I'm not afraid of death, for bliss is next.
This life is okay, though my mind is vexed.
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JimKoz
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2013-12-21 22:52:49]
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Re: Lone.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd December 2013 @ 01:35:16 AM AEST
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I like this, for although it rings sorrow, it's real, and genuine. You could have written it on the back of some used fax or whatever you had to write something with or on. It's genuine when I say,. do go back on stage and try not to fuss too much. Remember high anxiety, the Mel Brooks movie, corny yes, full of boisterous laughs, and stupid gaffs, clearly. Pencil in, twas the night before I first felt love. It's easy enough for a saxophone player to do, but it's easy to be loud
in any good horn section.
Really this is great writing!
Thanks for sharing it.
Peace! |
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Re: Lone.
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by Sagefairy on
Sunday, 22nd December 2013 @ 10:14:56 AM AEST
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| Oh man... Those emotions I can recognize. I like that word "vexed". I often feel that way. Good write. Blessings, S. |
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Re: Lone.
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by thistle_and_fern on
Saturday, 28th December 2013 @ 04:09:42 AM AEST
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Well written - can feel the hurt in the words
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