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surrender
Contributed by
christybthepoet
on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 07:21:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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My skin so milky white
Gazed upon by your eyes
Dark as night
Breathing in and breathing out
Your name escapes my lips
With the subtlety of a whispered shout
The warmth of your hands
Reaches me even before your touch
My cheeks aflame because my body desires you so much.
Waves of passion envelope me
Making it hard for my heart to see
Any other path to take but total surrender to you
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2013-12-21 19:21:13]
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Re: surrender
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 09:40:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: surrender
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 11:50:02 PM AEST
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| Descriptive, intense, sensual. |
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