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christmas
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 03:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a day meant to be happy
no matter what you see
I miss having all my kids
all surrounding me
but all will be okay
this much I think is true
I believe I am in their thoughts
no matter what they do
just look up towards the heavens
to the star that shines so bright
& know that I'm also looking at
this star with you tonight
I hope your lives are what you hoped for
as you fallow all your dreams
I'm sorry it took me so long
to know just what that means
just know your always thought about
no matter what you do
I love you very much
& merrychristmas to you
to all of my kids with love from
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA thehotshotpoet
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thehotshotpoet
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2013-12-21 15:19:57]
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Re: christmas
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by softerware on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 03:52:19 PM AEST
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Roy; The is just beautiful. I love the line "and know that I'm also looking at this star with you tonight."
You've touched every parent's heart with this one! It should be a Hallmark card!
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Re: christmas
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by emystar on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 10:19:39 PM AEST
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Very good write.
Blessings,
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Re: christmas
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by Amicus on
Monday, 23rd December 2013 @ 12:49:41 PM AEST
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Very emotional. I like that you are still hopeful instead of bitter with your children following their dreams.
much love (and merry Christmas),
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