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Two moons
Contributed by
flex4life13
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Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 02:54:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Foolish enough to be a genius, genius enough to be a fool,
On a distant planet which radiates from your eyes
I too reside below interbred hues of blue.
As once promised, at once recalled
mid-summer’s night, two moons, your eyes, as we politely stroll.
Someone somewhere beckons, no way no how will I allow this,
Something, deep within proclaims me of your transient bliss.
Interlude, starless skies, diverging, your mystical prowess,
The sun goes down, tomorrow seems so gloom,
A bouquet of roses your smile, flawless
The sun rises, today may we bloom.
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Re: Two moons
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by saesori on
Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 06:03:39 PM AEST
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| A nice poem, I especially like the last five lines. |
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Re: Two moons
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by Voyager on
Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 08:24:19 PM AEST
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| a nice poem, intricate and descriptive. |
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Re: Two moons
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by softerware on
Monday, 16th December 2013 @ 09:47:46 PM AEST
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You are a romantic! I love the opening line..it leads us right into the fantasy.
Lots of writers can serve up a banquet, but few can set the table as well as you have here!
well done!
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Re: Two moons
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2014 @ 09:00:03 PM AEST
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beautiful, great images,
hugs n' love nessa |
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