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Invent a Useful Talent
Contributed by
mvvenkataraman
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Saturday, 14th December 2013 @ 08:24:22 AM in AEST
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If you want to attain glory
Working hard is necessary
If a normal life, you lead
Success won't come indeed
Useful ideas make you great
And will change your fate
Low ideas make life a flop
So, those ides, you stop
Ever believe in your capacity
To discharge finely your duty
Positive attitude is a winner
Have it in a powerful manner
When optimism is by you had
To your glories, you can add
If you develop a negative mood
You are to your own self rude
March toward progress hopefully
Please equip yourself usefully
Face the challenge by being bold
Efforts help you earn cup of gold.
mvvenkataraman
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Re: Invent a Useful Talent
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 12:05:30 AM AEST
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I really like this. Excellent measure of truth and word to the wise or want to rise mind, or those who maybe don't feel enabled enough to dare.
The team, isn't because, structure is too structured sometimes, and talent stays dormant.
The hierarchy of needs too often is a vehicle of distain or discontent.
There's always the obvious high intellectual achiever looking down at the infinitesimals
in the huge crowd.
But that's okay, even if they don't see me,
I'm still there.
Follow the bliss, this simplicity is too often missed.
Thank you!
A lot of people might keep trying with words such as these.
Peace! |
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Re: Invent a Useful Talent
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by softerware on
Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 11:40:27 AM AEST
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Hooray! Well said! We all need to hear more of this philosophy!
Thank you for reminding me in verse that labor comes before we can reap the fruit!
My favorite line: "You are to your own self rude"
Keep writing!
softerware
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Re: Invent a Useful Talent
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 04:54:15 PM AEST
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beautifully written, excellent style and flow, my
only real talent is poetry:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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