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End ofDay
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
on
Wednesday, 11th December 2013 @ 08:10:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The night is filled with settling sounds
The birds outside their homes have found
Im sitting here, their songs enjoy
Relaxing quietly is my ploy
As night time falls a little lower
And people become a little slower
A calm descends upon the street
My home becomes my own retreat
To unwind away the stress and strain
Of working mode inside my brain
A sigh, a smile and the day does sleep
The birds go quiet without one peep
Go gently in the coming dark
until we are woken by the larks.
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thistle_and_fern
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2013-12-11 20:10:58]
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Re: End ofDay
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by RussellReinhardt on
Wednesday, 11th December 2013 @ 08:27:00 PM AEST
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Very good write I love poetry that rhymes and makes sense that flows well with logic in it's structure and not all mixed up. This one tells of a calm place HOME not just in the physical but in our mind where one can reflect and relax. This is something we all need to do on a daily bases. Beautiful message and reminder to us all TFS
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Re: End ofDay
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by Voyager on
Wednesday, 11th December 2013 @ 10:56:37 PM AEST
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| Nicely written. A simple yet sweet rhythm. |
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Re: End ofDay
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by gypsymaddness on
Thursday, 12th December 2013 @ 12:20:26 AM AEST
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| This is nice. This made me feel calm and soothed. I could picture the scenery that you spun in your words. Wonderful. Thanks for making me feel so good! :) |
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Re: End ofDay
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by JimKoz on
Thursday, 12th December 2013 @ 12:46:49 AM AEST
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| Love the imagery in this piece. Flows nicely as well. Great job. |
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Re: End ofDay
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by spud on
Thursday, 12th December 2013 @ 12:38:16 PM AEST
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This is why we love Poetry so much.
A brilliant piece of verse, my friend!
Take a bow.
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Re: End ofDay
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by Helenesovig on
Friday, 13th December 2013 @ 03:23:25 AM AEST
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| That was such a nice sweet poem, but I found it a little funny at the end, you see "laks" (not larks, but laks.) In my native language is salmon. ^-^ makes the end a bit weird. |
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Re: End ofDay
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th December 2013 @ 01:24:47 PM AEST
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| nice :-) |
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Re: End ofDay
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th January 2014 @ 07:05:30 AM AEST
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I read this during my lunch break at work and now I so want to go home and relax!!
Well done yet again.
Steve |
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Re: End ofDay
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 09:27:09 PM AEST
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beautiful, peaceful, a lovely poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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