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soup du jour
Contributed by
Jyssvw
on
Thursday, 5th December 2013 @ 05:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Take me to places I've never been
Show me guilty pleasure without sin
Grab me from my place
I'm stuck
Unhook me from the rack
Let me fall freely
Into your arms
If you don't catch me
I may die
You give me hope
Then you steal the rope
I set aside
To strangle my self
Choke on air
Despair
I enjoy through the streets
I don't care
F you
You wouldn't dare
Lift you're hands
I'll put you in you your place
On concrete
Smash your face
To bits
I can't resist
The temptation
To lay you out
Drag you about
In the streets you shout
F you
You deserve the worst possible outcome
Copyright ©
Jyssvw
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2013-12-05 17:34:28]
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Re: soup du jour
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th December 2013 @ 12:24:17 AM AEST
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Great writing but I certainly wouldn't want to be the one on the receiving end.
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Re: soup du jour
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 7th December 2013 @ 02:41:48 PM AEST
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WOW that's angry. Hope you find peace. Well written though.
Greeting
Rus |
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Re: soup du jour
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 27th December 2013 @ 07:50:42 PM AEST
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This reads like self mutilation at it's finest. Why are we so relentlessly tough on ourselves? It makes me think of getting your hopes up, or sticking your neck out for "another go". And sure enough, things blew up in your face again, as predicted. Keep an open mind and positive change is sure to come. I enjoyed this piece too.
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