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R.I.P WHITEY
Contributed by
colinb
on
Wednesday, 4th December 2013 @ 02:25:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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R.I.P. WHITEY
White tailed spider,
Was so excited,
A new home provided,
She was so relieved,
Under the sheets,
To start a Family,
Until the evil Queen,
Her name Key,
Came onto the scene,
Layed down beside her,
Evil Queen,
Rolled onto Whitey & her family,
So Whitey naturally
Bite the evil Queen,
To protect her family,
Evil Queen was so mean,
Put Whitey into a jar,
Then watched her starve,
Evil Queen laughed,
At Whitey's orphaned family.
Colin Bradley.
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colinb
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2013-12-04 14:25:13]
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Re: R.I.P WHITEY
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th December 2013 @ 12:52:11 AM AEST
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Very creative writing.
Happy holidays, blessings,
emy |
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Re: R.I.P WHITEY
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 7th December 2013 @ 03:48:16 PM AEST
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Has a funny side to it as well good write. Blessings
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Re: R.I.P WHITEY
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd March 2014 @ 04:54:09 PM AEST
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well woven story, excellent write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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