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Nice and Slow
Contributed by
Jyssvw
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Tuesday, 3rd December 2013 @ 05:29:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Troubled
A warped way to think
Recycled
Glass bottles filled with whiskey left to drink
Watered
In the soil the roots begin to sink
Determined
Brought to the edge and on the brink
I carry your heart
Always in mine
Memories of rain
Water pours till the end of time
I envy your strength
Your straightforward smile
Happiness in simple miracles
Luxurious in your own style
I cherish your laughter
My secrets are safe with you
I kept wanting it faster
But you knew exactly how to move
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2013-12-03 17:29:05]
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Re: Nice and Slow
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2013 @ 09:34:33 PM AEST
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Very unique write.
Good job.
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Re: Nice and Slow
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by Alkyman on
Wednesday, 4th December 2013 @ 03:33:00 AM AEST
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| I think the expression of dulled emotion in this poem is fantastic. I think this writing is wonderful. Thank you for publishing this and therefore allowing me to read it. Andy |
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Re: Nice and Slow
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 9th December 2013 @ 12:44:04 AM AEST
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Love it, easy to read and full of emotion. Beautiful. Great write.
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