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Without You
Contributed by
ruby_star_angel
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Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Without you, my heart can't take,
Without you, I'm sure I'll break.
You are my life, I know that now,
Promise you'll stay, make it a vow.
Every minute of every day, I think of you,
I miss you a lot, and I love you too.
At times I sit and listen to the rain,
Without you, I'm in so much pain.
Every day, though, you slip away,
I can't take it, don't leave me today.
Without you, I can't smile or laugh.
You are what I always wanted to have.
I remember the times we spent together,
I'll never forget that moment, ever.
Without you, I cry my heart out.
Without you, my life I doubt.
I want you here, where can you be?
I want us be alone, just you and me.
I listen to my heart, not my mind,
Love flows through me; without you, I'm blind.
Life without you is too much to bare,
I miss you so much, I really do care.
But for now, we're going to be apart,
Without you, I lost the key to my heart.
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ruby_star_angel
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2003-05-17 21:35:00]
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Re: Without You
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by JJTiger on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 10:40:33 PM AEST
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| Nice piece of work. I totally understand it. Keep writing!! |
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Re: Without You
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 12:12:56 PM AEST
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Really good write. Can't say i've been there myself, but it's a lovely poem all the same.
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Re: Without You
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by The_Poet on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 11:23:36 AM AEST
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| Very Sentimental and beautiful.. Shud I say a genuine cry to the one you love to come back to you !!!.. |
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