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Miracle
Contributed by
speedy
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Saturday, 30th November 2013 @ 08:03:09 PM in AEST
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A child of eight
Within a bed;
A monster grown
Inside her head.
Two weeks inside,
Alone in pain.
She was afraid;
Had life to gain.
A child of nine
Away from home;
Her mom alone
Began to roam.
Hospitals here;
Hospitals there,
With pain & fear
& loss of hair.
A child of ten
So very weak;
Survivor young:
No need to seek.
A woman now
Of thirty- three;
A walking miracle:
That would be me.
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speedy
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Re: Miracle
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st December 2013 @ 12:31:42 AM AEST
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and more than probably by most accounts one fine gift " you are" to all who know you now!
Wow... thank you for sharing this story in such a brief poetic way! Absolutely wonderful!
Peace! |
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Re: Miracle
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st December 2013 @ 02:02:51 AM AEST
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Great write and I'm happy to know u r a walking miracle
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Miracle
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 2nd December 2013 @ 08:19:54 PM AEST
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| Great story , and a great way to tell it . |
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Re: Miracle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th December 2013 @ 02:29:01 AM AEST
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The poem flows so easily. You have a natural gift. Love it!
Glad that you're okay now.
Tim |
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Re: Miracle
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 9th December 2013 @ 10:10:05 AM AEST
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The title provokes only one thought. Miracle this is yet another testimony of how grate our God is. I'm sure you are everything you must be, and a joy to your family. Excellent write just love it reads easy flows well. Blessings
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Re: Miracle
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 02:40:08 PM AEST
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you have had so many trials in life yet your poetry shines and is ever beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Miracle
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 31st October 2020 @ 02:01:52 AM AEST
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Sad but inspirational.
Another beautiful write...
You/'/re a survivor. Most poets are.
Color me a fan.
Jim |
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