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LAURA
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 29th November 2013 @ 10:56:10 PM in AEST
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Your work goes beyond compare.
You're very kind.
You make the sick and disabled
Understand they are devine.
See I told you that you're special
in your compassion.
God had an EMT two cars behind
You before your back broke from
the impaction.
The one that came at you head on
Wasn't paying attention she was
Messing with her cell phone, did
I happen to mention?
God didn't let her ignorance
Take you'll out.
You are one of heavens
Angels to show us love and
There's no doubt.
You are family now as
My heart adopted you.
So rest you mind and body
As your healing comes thru.
Luv you girl and we all are holding you up in prayer.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2013-11-29 22:56:10]
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Re: LAURA
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th November 2013 @ 11:01:04 PM AEST
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Cell phones...a new danger making inattentive driving worse. :(
Beautiful and sad Emy. Sorry to hear of this.
*hugs* |
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by speedy on
Saturday, 30th November 2013 @ 06:58:32 PM AEST
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It was very heartfelt. Good write. I liked it.
Hannah B |
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Re: LAURA
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by colinb on
Friday, 6th December 2013 @ 01:38:13 AM AEST
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| So heart touching beautifull |
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Re: LAURA
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by dvtpdw on
Saturday, 7th December 2013 @ 05:59:16 PM AEST
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| Your words gave my heart a tug, and a smile. So much care and soul in what you write. Bless her and prayers. Very touching write, P |
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Re: LAURA
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd December 2013 @ 04:09:13 AM AEST
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very sad story, Laura sounds incredibly caring and courageous. Well spoken. One should write about the greatness of others who do such good.
Thanks for sharing!
Peace! |
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Re: LAURA
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by Ramfire on
Monday, 23rd December 2013 @ 10:27:09 AM AEST
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| Your poem shows your appreciation of a good friend. I too hope your friend recovers totally. |
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Re: LAURA
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 09:45:13 PM AEST
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so sad for her, some people don't deserve what they get at all, this is beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: LAURA
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 17th May 2014 @ 08:59:32 PM AEST
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A whole dysfunction for today's society...cellular stupidity.
I hope she has healed well.
A touching write!
Thanks for sharing...
Michael |
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