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That Kind Of lOve
Contributed by
mdark14
on
Friday, 22nd November 2013 @ 06:35:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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On a summer's day long, long ago
I fell in love and I'll never know
Just what it was that made me feel
So drawn to her, what the appeal
That set my pulses so to race
When e'er I gazed upon that face
Of one who was scarce but a child
Yet even then could drive me wild
I'll never know the how's and why's
I lost my heart to those blue eyes
But when I got that long sought kiss
I knew I'd found my Perfect Miss
My elfin girl from down the lane
And I'll never let her go again
For how could I describe our love?
Romantic love, all hearts and flowers
No way to count the days and hours
Spent in self-indulgent wishes
And thoughts of long awaited kisses
Of sweet embraces, tender sighs
And gazing into love filled eyes
Oh yes, it is that kind of love
Or, is it yet the love of passion
The ecstasy that knows no ration
That shuddering nerve-tingling feeling
The climax with your senses reeling
The wondrous joy when you discover
That sweet surrender to your lover
Oh yes, it's that kind of love too.
Or even yet a love that grows
One that cares and one that knows
That sees beyond the outer skin
Into the person deep within
That loves the spirit and the soul
The inner self that makes the whole
Built on trust and empathy
A love you know was meant to be
The love we share is all these things
A love that has no need of rings
A love you never need to doubt
A love I cannot live without
A love to last us all our days
A love I'll share with you always
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mdark14
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2013-11-22 18:35:44]
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Re: That Kind Of lOve
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by softerware on
Friday, 22nd November 2013 @ 09:32:32 PM AEST
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I have never heard love described in so many ways, each layer going deeper and deeper into the soul.
Very lovely and sincere. thank you for writing this. |
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Re: That Kind Of lOve
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by emystar on
Friday, 22nd November 2013 @ 10:45:56 PM AEST
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Good work,
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: That Kind Of lOve
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 23rd November 2013 @ 04:15:10 AM AEST
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| Well if this isn't something to bring warmth on a winter's day esp to those of us whose cynicism has frosted up our eyes. Great write, good rhythm and rhyme whilst the change in style gives time to pause for thought. All I can say is lucky girl! |
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Re: That Kind Of lOve
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by bluestars on
Tuesday, 26th November 2013 @ 01:01:43 AM AEST
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Fantastic poem from beginning to end.
What a great way to describe the way you feel about love and how this girl makes you feel.
Great flow.
Thanks for sharing
Keep on writing
Best wishes. |
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