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Illusions
Contributed by
speedy
on
Friday, 22nd November 2013 @ 09:29:18 AM in AEST
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I never should
Have trusted you;
Should have seen
Your love as untrue.
I never thought
That I would see;
The day would come
You're cruel to me.
I thought I could
Put faith in you.
I never thought
You'd make me blue.
I always saw
A caring friend;
I never thought
That it could end.
I want to see
The world go by;
Without you here,
I cannot fly.
Copyright ©
speedy
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2013-11-22 09:29:18]
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Re: Illusions
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 22nd November 2013 @ 04:17:57 PM AEST
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Hi there
Yes in every relationship there will be conflict from time to time this is healthy but even more so if peace is found at the end. Life is to short to walk through it alone if that makes any sense. I'm happy you and your friend maid peace. Blessings
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Re: Illusions
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by emystar on
Friday, 22nd November 2013 @ 10:55:14 PM AEST
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great writing.
Trust is hard to survive these days.
I do know what that feels like.
huggs, luv, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Illusions
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 02:30:54 PM AEST
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| simply beautiful, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Illusions
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 25th August 2020 @ 02:00:24 AM AEST
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You remind me of my cousin Janet.
A quietly kind soul. Great writing....
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