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Night & Day
Contributed by
speedy
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Thursday, 21st November 2013 @ 06:39:01 PM in AEST
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Sometimes it's dark
& I can't see;
Sometimes it's black
In front of me.
Sometimes I'm sad
& yet can't cry.
Sometimes it's bad;
I'm not sure why.
Sometimes it's light
& I can see
Obstacles revealed
In front of me.
I sometimes think
I'm going to drop;
Sometimes I say
I'd like to stop.
That's when I hear
You say to me:
Keep on fighting
It makes you free.
Copyright ©
speedy
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2013-11-21 18:39:01]
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Re: Night & Day
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 21st November 2013 @ 07:01:04 PM AEST
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Hello Speedy
Its very nice to see something that is easy to read and set out in a simple fashion that you don't need a degree to decipher it. Yet carries a deep meaningful and profound message that comes only will life's experience over many years. Loved it. Blessings
Greetings
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Re: Night & Day
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by emystar on
Thursday, 21st November 2013 @ 09:47:51 PM AEST
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Hello friend,
You did a great job of expressing your deep feelings.
I can relate.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Night & Day
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by softerware on
Saturday, 23rd November 2013 @ 11:54:48 AM AEST
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Well said. I agree, !t is struggle that shapes us. Nice to have someone to encourage you too!
Jaye |
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Re: Night & Day
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 09:21:18 PM AEST
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lovely:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Night & Day
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by joydeep_nath on
Sunday, 17th May 2015 @ 03:06:30 PM AEST
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| great last para!! |
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Re: Night & Day
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 1st August 2015 @ 01:44:41 PM AEST
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Wow, great job! I am glad I read this.
~Scorp |
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Re: Night & Day
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2018 @ 06:06:40 PM AEST
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Like Russell said.
Just plain and honest without a bunch of nonsense. I prefer this style. We need more poems from you. |
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