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Look Who's Back
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 09:08:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Look who's back
back into the madness
I'm a crippled pilgrim
who sleeps so peacefully
because I
I
dream no more,
I got the captive audience routine down
as people talk to me
I see their lips moving
I make them believe
that I am listening
but I
I don't hear a sound,
although I need it I must ignore
love and it's psychotic reactions
though I still adore it I can't take it no more
this time
I must remain strong.
I'm no longer looking for
or need a reason for existing
I can function now
even when I mentally bleed
when the
the emotional torture comes shoot me once more,
Something deep
just
sweetly dripped into my mind
I feel so free as I release
and slowly flow.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2013-11-19 09:08:53]
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Re: Look Who's Back
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 11:21:03 AM AEST
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" although I need it I must ignore
love and it's psychotic reactions
though I still adore it I can't take it no more"
Beautifully written. I really loved these words.
Great write!! |
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Re: Look Who's Back
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 26th March 2014 @ 11:25:56 AM AEST
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I really like the way this is formatted. It makes your voice come alive and the emotional impact is felt.
Very nicely done.
~Scorp |
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Re: Look Who's Back
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 06:59:58 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings............
hugs n' love nessa |
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