|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Wish I Wasn't Born Today
Contributed by
SevasTra
on
Monday, 18th November 2013 @ 05:28:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
You think I'm alive
Yeah, well you're wrong
Cause I'm dead inside
You think you can see me just fine
Yeah, well you're blind
Cause all you see, is my disguise
All you see, is a face covered with lies
Inside, I Feel Like
I'm Just Wasted Space
Unknown To The World, No Body
I Wish I Was Never Born Today
You think I'm alright
Yeah, well you're wrong
Cause I'm hurting inside
This smile you see on my face
Well, it's fake
It doesn't mean anything
It's just my disguise, so I can hide
Hide all this pain
Inside, I Feel Like
I'm Just Wasted Space
Unknown To The World, No Body
Inside, I Feel Like
I Have Myself To Blame
I Deserve All The Darkness
That Comes My Way
I Wish I Was Never Born Today.
Copyright ©
SevasTra
... [
2013-11-18 17:28:28]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Wish I Wasn't Born Today
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th November 2013 @ 11:55:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Reminds me of something I wrote/said: "I am no one, I am nobody, therefore I am of no consequence" or what my cousin says: "I'm happiest when I'm depressed."
Sometimes the best masks are the smiles we wear when not really feeling like it.
Sad sad poem but very nicely written.
Tim |
|
|
Re: Wish I Wasn't Born Today
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 04:36:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very sad but great writing.
I remember feeling that way from time to time in my past. I take meds that helps me a lot.
Hang tuff, blessings, huggs,
emy |
|
|
Re: Wish I Wasn't Born Today
(User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 07:52:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Lovely expression of emotional torture
well done.... |
|
|
Re: Wish I Wasn't Born Today
(User Rating: 1 )
by BTsButterfly on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 04:48:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I could not have expressed the feelings in my heart more perfectly then had I wrote them myself. You are not alone.
Nice work. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
