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untitled
Contributed by
speedy
on
Monday, 18th November 2013 @ 07:12:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Falling down
From the sky
Like a person's
Mournful cry.
Reaching out
From far away;
A burst of colour
To light the way.
A sign of hope
From up above;
The rainbow grows
A symbol of love.
A flash of light;
A boom of sound.
Fear can make
You come unbound.
A burst of cloud;
I will not run.
You must be brave
'Cause here's the sun.
Copyright ©
speedy
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2013-11-18 07:12:51]
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Re: untitled
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by alicewhite on
Monday, 18th November 2013 @ 10:38:42 AM AEST
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| beautiful rhythmic poem that flows effortlessly, x |
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Re: untitled
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 18th November 2013 @ 11:13:00 AM AEST
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| Nice . Well written. Great flow to it |
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Re: untitled
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by SevasTra on
Monday, 18th November 2013 @ 03:43:11 PM AEST
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| Very colorful :) |
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Re: untitled
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 04:43:59 AM AEST
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Every one else has said it all but great work.
blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: untitled
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 07:56:44 AM AEST
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| I dig the way This flows ..... |
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Re: untitled
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by 143 on
Sunday, 24th November 2013 @ 10:11:22 PM AEST
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| :) |
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Re: untitled
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 26th April 2014 @ 03:04:05 PM AEST
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| beautiful, hugs n' love nessa |
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