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Candlelight
Contributed by
speedy
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Thursday, 14th November 2013 @ 03:10:36 PM in AEST
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There's a candle
In the dark;
Like a beacon
In our hearts.
We try to keep
That candle lit,
But it seems like
An impossible bit.
There's a light
That's fading fast.
No matter what
It will not last.
There are people
With a lot to gain.
These same people
Are filled with pain.
We have lost
One who was near;
A friend & family
We held so dear.
One day, the dark
Will light again;
One day, our hearts
Will sing again.
We won't forget
The unfair end
To which we lost
A special friend.
Copyright ©
speedy
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2013-11-14 15:10:36]
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Re: Candlelight
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 15th November 2013 @ 02:56:42 PM AEST
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Very poignant indeed
25 is a short live, seems so hardly lived.
It reminds me of my cousin who died at just 19.
She suffered a lot in her short life but she always had a smile on her face.
Thanks for igniting the memory again.
Steve |
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Re: Candlelight
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th November 2013 @ 11:22:59 PM AEST
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An excellent tribute to someone who was taken from this world too soon.
Sorry to hear about your loss.
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Tim |
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Re: Candlelight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th November 2013 @ 04:04:43 AM AEST
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sorry to hear about your friend, this poem says a lot about
your friend as well as your most fortunate friendship.
It's pure and exceptional.
Thank you for sharing it!
Peace! |
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Re: Candlelight
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 06:34:55 AM AEST
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Very sad but beautifully written and great tribute for your luved one.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Candlelight
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 06:48:54 PM AEST
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beautifully moving and written, so sorry about your friend,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Candlelight
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 26th October 2016 @ 08:07:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful but sad.
James |
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Re: Candlelight
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by allforyou on
Wednesday, 29th September 2021 @ 03:38:07 PM AEST
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| I/'/ve lost people recently and this really sums it up. Gives me a little hope. |
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