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Tick Tock
Contributed by
GloomyBlu
on
Thursday, 14th November 2013 @ 12:14:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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as the seconds go by they mean less and less
tick tock
tick
tock
each moment compared to the last is but a smaller fraction of your life
tick tock
tick
tock
and try as you might to save the time that goes by
tick tock
tick
tock
why save something meaningless and ever smaller?
tick tock
tick
tock
Copyright ©
GloomyBlu
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2013-11-14 00:14:42]
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Re: Tick Tock
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 16th November 2013 @ 03:08:31 AM AEST
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| Why save something meaningless and ever smaller........ great line to a clever poem in my world a metaphor for healing as it gives the reader a reason to let the past go. |
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Re: Tick Tock
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by emystar on
Sunday, 24th November 2013 @ 08:00:25 PM AEST
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Fantastic.
emy
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Re: Tick Tock
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by FireStarter on
Tuesday, 18th August 2015 @ 04:28:57 PM AEST
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| Thats real good :) |
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