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I no longer know you
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Wednesday, 13th November 2013 @ 01:45:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I no longer know you
Sinew and muscle shrink with time
The foul wine of autumn
The star that cannot shine
I have never heard a song
That does not sing you
I no longer know you
Our eyes grow blind with snow
The cruel shine of winter
The seed that cannot grow
I have never seen a sunset
That does not dream you
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Re: I no longer know you
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th November 2013 @ 01:58:46 AM AEST
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Beautiful and touching at the deepest soul level.
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Re: I no longer know you
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th November 2013 @ 03:33:16 AM AEST
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Very beautiful dear friend.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: I no longer know you
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 13th November 2013 @ 02:36:24 PM AEST
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Wow, Abraham. It has been awhile since I have read your work, and it seems to be ever-evolving. This is wonderfully written. There is purity in the love you speak of, with a bittersweet aftertaste that tugs at the soul. Loved this!
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Re: I no longer know you
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by speedy on
Wednesday, 27th November 2013 @ 04:59:17 PM AEST
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I can relate. Sometimes there can be so many layers to someone's personality - defenses - that you never really know them.
Good write.
Hannah B |
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