|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
IF YOU MUST GO
Contributed by
emystar
on
Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 04:20:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
|
You'll have a new body in re birth
Where your heart is.
You'll still our guardian angel
To keep us from harm.
Me and our kids.
If you must go want Promise
There want be tears.
Your heart, love, will soar
Thru eternity's years.
Our happy moments will
Survive our Earthly realm.
It's ours alone.
No one will ever take
Our times away with them.
Life didn't go as we thought.
Of course thru time that's
The way it goes.
Still all of our children
Live on as our legacy, we know.
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2013-11-11 04:20:19]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 06:26:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Saddening. |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on
Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 01:20:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very emotional |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 02:59:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Beautifully sad, Emy. :( :) |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 12th November 2013 @ 11:30:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well written, bud sad.
Great word usage, really makes me think. |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by euphoema on
Tuesday, 12th November 2013 @ 02:13:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| at the same time this poem is sad and happy...nice! joyfultears!!! |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th November 2013 @ 12:59:01 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
bitter sweet hugs lady
Michelle |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 13th November 2013 @ 02:44:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Our happy moments will
Survive our Earthly realm.
That line right there sums it up for me. There is frank honesty in this piece. The love is undeniable, but the resolve to not be destroyed by a fork in the road is palatable. This is well written and well expressed, Emy. Great job.
~Scorp |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 19th November 2013 @ 07:54:09 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| If you go take me with you :) |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on
Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 05:31:34 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| As always Emy a beautiful write, I didn't realize you were still posting here but so glad you are :) |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 06:33:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
sadly beautiful
|
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on
Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 07:59:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Brought a tear with your beautiful words.
I hope all is well with you and yours!
Thank you for sharing, dear lady!
Hugs,
Michael |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th May 2014 @ 11:02:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
{{{{emy}}}} so heartbreaking! beautifully written in
a positive way, blessings,
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on
Saturday, 16th August 2014 @ 11:25:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
bravo emystar
Invierno |
|
|
Re: IF YOU MUST GO
(User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 26th February 2018 @ 05:41:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Lovely but sad and true! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
