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FREINDS
Contributed by
colinb
on
Monday, 11th November 2013 @ 02:06:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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FRIENDS
Little girl Milan,
Loved her friend Bilan,
Little koala Bilan,
Loved his friend Milan,
Friends they weren't silent,
Playing in the warm climate,
Laughing louder than a siren,
Tree's they were climbing,
To the top Milan racing Bilan,
They are tired from play,
At the end of the day,
Hungry mummy say's,
Before eating you must pray,
Eating dinner you may,
Mummy time to say,
Goodnight to Milan & Bilan,
Cuddle in the night's cold climate,
Dreaming of a new day,
So again they can play.
Colin Bradley.
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colinb
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2013-11-11 02:06:01]
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Re: FREINDS
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 12th November 2013 @ 04:00:19 PM AEST
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| I like the innocence in this, and the purity of a childhood. I like the word play and the flow. It made me smile and giggle. Great write, P |
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Re: FREINDS
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 08:24:33 PM AEST
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adorable and so sweet! you have a real talent at
this style poetry!
hugs n' love nessa |
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