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Restricted From Flaws
Contributed by
jason_robert_britt
on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I won't assimilate
I am the fag that you hate
I am the sinner, burning
Falling to my pre-set fate
I am your laws
I am restricted from flaws
I cannot marry, yearning
Bleeding in the eagle's claws
I am so ugly
But just scars
Please stop poking at me
This world is ugly
Rape the stars
Won't stop hating to be
I am the whore
I am the one you adore
I am your fear, churning
Tearing me up at the core
I'm just a joke
I am the ***** that you poke
I used to love life's turning
Something deep inside has broke
My child is dead, ghost dripping red
The voice that's crying in my head
I am your hate, I am your hate
Your key unlocked Lucifer's gate
My child is dead, ghost dripping red
The voice that's crying in my head
I wanna die, I wanna die
Poke your hate right in my eyes
I won't assimilate
I am the fag that you hate
I am the sinner burning
Falling to my pre-set fate
I'm just a joke
I am the ***** which you poke
I used to love life's turning
Something deep inside has broke
I am so ugly
But just scars
Please stop poking at me
Your world is ugly
Rape the stars
Won't stop hating to be
My child is dead, ghost dripping red
The voice that's crying in my head
I am your hate, I am your hate
Your key unlocked Lucifer's gate
My child is dead, ghost dripping red
The voice that's crying in my head
I wanna die, I wanna die
Poke your hate right in my eyes
Keep your laws off my body....
Your oppression is so naughty....
Keep your laws off my body....
Your opinion is so haughty...
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jason_robert_britt
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2003-05-17 15:05:00]
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Re: Restricted From Flaws
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by tease_whizz on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 03:36:57 PM AEST
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you deal with an important and controversial issue well and the use of language leaves a lasting impact on the reader.
i completely agree that we should have freedom over our own bodies, especially in the case of homosexuality. i can't see how what people do behind closed doors is any of the law's business if it doesn't harm or exploit anyone. a powerful poem, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Restricted From Flaws
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by shelby on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 04:41:35 PM AEST
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Powerful poem. I dont agree with using aboration for birth controll. As for the rest.......... I feel what a person does in their home is their right > Private life is just that a persons private life.
Michelle |
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Re: Restricted From Flaws
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 05:06:32 PM AEST
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| Wow, powerful write... it was screaming at me!! Good job standing up for your rights!! |
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Re: Restricted From Flaws
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 04:42:14 PM AEST
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The last fifty years has witnessed a dramatic decline in Christianity in tne UK. Hundreds of churches and chapels have "disappeared",church attendance has declined to such an extent that everywhere three and four parishes have been joined into one.
But people still cling to the belief in God. although they do not practice the formalities of communal worship.
They will not go as far as denying the existance of God for if we do.......... then we lose our "immortal soul" our "ability to pray"
the devine authority for what we deem "proper behaviour" " the inferior position of women"
"the concept of sin and forgivness" etc etc.
Casting off "the chains of traditional beliefs" is comming........... but until it does, controversy will rage.
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Re: Restricted From Flaws
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 02:47:33 AM AEST
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| Thank you for your comments, it is true that "bigotry" is starting to go away. However, in a country where "freedom" is suppost to be handed to everyone, homosexuals still have none. I applaud your wisdom in seeing that the church is most of the cause for this type of biggotry, however, if those who call themselves christians would actually do their homework, they would see the message of Christ is to love, not hate, and to give freedom to every man, woman, and child. Eventhough God said that homosexuality was against nature, he also said to love eachother no matter what or who they are, including your enemies. The church itself is hypocritical of it's own beliefs, which is why so many stray today. In Revelations, it was foretold of the harlot on the beast's back, hand in hand with the beast. Hear my words; the church is the harlot, who has sold herself for money and power. The beast is yet to come... or is it? Thank you again for your kind words. Until we meet again... jason |
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Re: Restricted From Flaws
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 04:31:17 AM AEST
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| I take that back... the beast is here, it's called capitalizm. |
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