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Contradictions
Contributed by
Saira
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Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
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Why you have to be so wonderful, so indifferent
The more I like you,
The more I hate you.
The more I want to be with you,
The more I want to part with you.
Lost in the grey despair of nothingness,
I fall into an abyss of desire.
My forlornness evokes the flood of tears,
Of loosing you I so much fear.
Filled with hope, I light the lonely candle,
To seek my path to somewhere, yet to nowhere.
I dip into my own bosom, my own grieve,
Nourishing my sorrowful beauty in your humorous irony.
How so well-put-together I look,
But inside I’m a raging inferno.
Seeing my soul being crushed and shackled,
Oh! Doesn’t it feel so good?
I know it makes a little sense,
To think and feel like that.
But like they say, nothing ventured, nothing gained,
So I’m willing to venture on your love, to endure its pain.
Why these contradictions,
Worsening this addiction?
Why this apprehension,
Vacillating these emotions?
Oh! Why!?!?
Copyright ©
Saira
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2003-05-17 13:35:00]
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Re: Contradictions
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 06:43:13 PM AEST
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| again this is a very nice piece of work...its really cool. |
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Re: Contradictions
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 02:48:38 PM AEST
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Your dilema is the price we pay for having imagination and intelligence imposed upon a natural selection system designed for all species.
The uncertainties of foresight and doubt are very well portrayed in your poem
Question, do you both have sufficient tradition, fortitude and resove to carry your love across life's stormy seas |
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Re: Contradictions
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 09:21:50 AM AEST
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| impeccable piece of poetry!!!!!! u beautifully articulated the oppressive feelings of a person who is facing a queerest situation i.e things which she/he hates most about her/hislover are the things which compells her/him most towards her lover. certainly a dilemma |
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Re: Contradictions
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by Saira on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 06:06:55 PM AEST
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| Thanks for your comments. Regarding your question, all I can say is my poems are my only universal thoughts. |
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Re: Contradictions
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by Saira on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 06:11:50 PM AEST
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| Am glad u liked it. Thanks. |
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Re: Contradictions
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by Saira on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 06:12:02 PM AEST
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| Yup, U got it right :-) thnxz |
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Re: Contradictions
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 08:04:13 AM AEST
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| wow ... this is great poetry .. I have these feelings too ... well written ... Jan |
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Re: Contradictions
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 12:58:25 AM AEST
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| Well, words fail me. |
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Re: Contradictions
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 07:19:20 AM AEST
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| Thanks once again :-) |
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Re: Contradictions
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 12:11:48 AM AEST
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But this cannot be love, for with true love, there is no pain!
Beautifully written...well expressed also. I learned the hard way.....if it hurts you'd better exist! If it's real love....it's not a contradiction. It's smooth, dependable, trustworthy, and most of all peaceful and calm!
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Re: Contradictions
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by Saira on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 01:46:35 PM AEST
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You are right in your saying my friend. But in this poem, everything is so complex. He doesn’t know what she feels for him.
Thanks for being concerned and leaving your thoughtful views.
Saira
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