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Hot Air Balloon
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
on
Friday, 1st November 2013 @ 11:50:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Before leaving the states, accept this welcoming basket
The destination place printed on a sealed packet
Absent without a passenger and pilot
Enter on this gondola, fancy the blue and green climate
It is beautiful like bouquets of flowers
As we embark on this adventure
To push open the envelope
Use your hands of thermal
Breathe new life, heat will expand the fertile
Orbit the planet earth with me in a circle
Warm feelings will deliver inflation
Easing off slowly from the ground
It is like being a cloud, a part of the wind
Alittle scared goosebumps appear on the skin
It is a journey on a hot air balloon
It is sunny, proposal is coming soon
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Re: Hot Air Balloon
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 1st November 2013 @ 01:29:40 PM AEST
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| I so enjoyed your imagery, and use of delightful description! You share with the reader feelings that ebb and flow with your words. Great write, P |
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Re: Hot Air Balloon
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 1st November 2013 @ 05:45:27 PM AEST
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Enchanting read, full of vivid imagery
Once of those poems I could read again!!
Nice write
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Re: Hot Air Balloon
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd November 2013 @ 02:58:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery and great metaphor.
Thank you for sharing this.
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Re: Hot Air Balloon
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd November 2013 @ 09:35:48 PM AEST
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This is quite unique, there are so many things to read into this, yet, it's simple and laced with hope.
I like the phrase "inflation Easing off slowly from the ground"!
You can see well all the places below from a tall building or mountain top, but in a hot air balloon, it's more like taking a stroll. We miss too often so much.
This is very nice and I enjoyed reading it quite a lot!
Thanks!
Peace!
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Re: Hot Air Balloon
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by ebooibo on
Sunday, 10th November 2013 @ 06:48:50 PM AEST
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| keep up the good work |
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