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the pain goes on
Contributed by
lisamary
on
Tuesday, 29th October 2013 @ 06:49:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Wayne finds it tricky
Talking about his niece Nicky
To him she was the best
But their was a problem with her breast
She put up a damn good fight
And fought with all her might
Nicky had all the drive
But couldn't survive
After two long years
And all those tears
With all she had to give
Sadly Nicky wouldn't live
As there was no more pretending
Because her time was ending
Nicky really was a chancer
In the end it was the cancer
That took her away
On that very sad day
As Wayne still grieves
Her love never leaves
So as she watches over from above
We ask that she Rests In Piece our love
Copyright ©
lisamary
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2013-10-29 18:49:04]
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Re: the pain goes on
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 29th October 2013 @ 10:12:55 PM AEST
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this is a fine tribute to someone that. is very luved.
blessings,
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Re: the pain goes on
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 1st November 2013 @ 01:32:43 PM AEST
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| There is no harder poem to write nor greater tribute that one can give, than to pay homage and love to a passed love one. This you did very well, with great feeling and trust. God bless and prayers to all. P |
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Re: the pain goes on
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 15th November 2013 @ 03:24:03 PM AEST
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The ability to sum up grief and serve it to the world as a piece of yourself is always to be commended.
Nice write
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