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Whole Laura lovin' goin' on
Contributed by
spud
on
Monday, 28th October 2013 @ 08:33:03 AM in AEST
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Whatchamacallit
that thingamabob?
Her head is in limbo
and not on the job!
He loves her - yes
or he loves her not,
he's a dream and a half
and she's losing the plot!
He kissed her once
then he kissed her twice,
her heart's a big sugar globe
sprinkled with spice.
The frogs that she's kissed
- as appealing as mince -
she dances on clouds
kissed by a Prince.
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spud
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2013-10-28 08:33:03]
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Re: Whole Laura lovin' goin' on
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th October 2013 @ 12:50:51 PM AEST
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| LMAO! Love it! |
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Re: Whole Laura lovin' goin' on
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 30th October 2013 @ 02:54:26 AM AEST
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Nice write, friend.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Whole Laura lovin' goin' on
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by Spike on
Friday, 1st November 2013 @ 04:54:22 AM AEST
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spud,
what a sweet and gentle dedication to love and the lassie!
just watch her when she's pulling the tap beers - love's superb, but a headless pint is a tragedy.
S.
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Re: Whole Laura lovin' goin' on
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 1st November 2013 @ 09:15:56 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this light-hearted piece. Thanks for the smile :)
~Scorp |
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Re: Whole Laura lovin' goin' on
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 3rd November 2013 @ 07:33:21 PM AEST
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Cute !
Ain't love grand?
Beautifully sweet, my friend. ;)
~ B
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Re: Whole Laura lovin' goin' on
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by northernlights on
Friday, 8th November 2013 @ 12:20:58 PM AEST
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| awww this is so sweetly delicious I could eat it x |
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Re: Whole Laura lovin' goin' on
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2014 @ 02:11:18 PM AEST
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awe! this is adorable! the flow was so great i was
at the endline before i knew it and was wearing a
big smile lol, so well and beautiful you write!
hugs n' love nessa |
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