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Fear
Contributed by
jay187_
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Thursday, 24th October 2013 @ 12:20:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Far enough to barely be sighted, close enough to be completely felt
That unwanted lingering presence there that can't be helped
Pathetic attempts to halt your persistent pursuit
Fleeing, ducking, hiding, as you proceed; denying a period of regroup
Amusing it is to think you can be overcome
Outrageous is the thought that you can be eluded from
Courageous is it to look you in the face and not be overcome
Arguably impressive, hardly ignorant nor dumb
Always odds-on favorite, you possess no measurable weakness
You aren't posed a measurable threat because of your defense
Your greatest strength are the victims preyed upon
Your expertise is second to none, this considered fun?
The epitome of discouragement that is what you are
Your lack of sympathy surpasses bizarre
A black hole to confidence and a dimness to a star
The black paint to the luminous art, the taint to the bravest heart
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2013-10-24 00:20:47]
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Re: Fear
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by thezenmonkey on
Thursday, 24th October 2013 @ 06:47:33 AM AEST
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| beautiful! i like the ending - the taint to the bravest heart. |
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Re: Fear
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 27th October 2013 @ 08:59:43 AM AEST
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Well you clearly have a gift for the written word and you have used it well here.
Impressive piece, very powerful.
I look forward to many more.
Steve |
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