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Northern skies
Contributed by
saesori
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Sunday, 20th October 2013 @ 05:49:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Lights in the distance,
guide me through darkness.
Flickering in front of me,
always intangible,
elusive as a rainbow.
They depict fighting lions
and hissing snakes,
lost gods and forgotten kings.
One day I too
will fare among thee O northern stars
and follow the trails
of great old Jupiter and Mars.
But Alas, I fear this is the end
of this heavenly confrontation,
Apollo is fast approaching.
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2013-10-20 05:49:05]
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Re: Northern skies
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by alicewhite on
Sunday, 20th October 2013 @ 03:24:41 PM AEST
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| great poem, reminds me of aliester Crowley, short concise but very symbolic and loaded with information , keep writing,x |
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Re: Northern skies
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by Flex4life13 on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2013 @ 06:59:23 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful symbolism. |
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Re: Northern skies
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2013 @ 04:55:07 PM AEST
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| One day I too will fare among thee o northern stars....... words to bring you home, to the place you are destined for, your final journey home and you have painted a beautiful journey with a hint of a sting in its tale! Your words flicker as the lights taking the reader into a surreal world.A wonderful mystical feel to this well written. |
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