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Blame Cupid
Contributed by
ThatGuyNamedDre
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Sunday, 20th October 2013 @ 01:32:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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♥ If You're Thinking, Oh Dre Posted Another Poem, I Really Need This, My Day Was Pretty *****, But His Words Will Probably Ease It.. Don't Believe It, I Am Not On A Sweet Tip, & If You Have A Weak Stomach I Would Suggest You Stop Reading.. You've Been Warned, Now Enjoy The Flow, & Don't Think That I'm Psycho, It's Just A Horror Show.. Ain't ***** Changed But The Rules To His Spit Game, Drop 1 Girl & Add 2 To His List Mayne. That's Kinda Foul, I Should Use A Different Word Choice, Cause Shawty Said He Blew(Blue) It, Like He Had On Turqoise. Duh She's Mad, Man He Heard It All In Her Voice, But He Don't Care Cause She Had Already Made Her Choice, When He Saw Her ***** With That Other Guy, See He Thought She Loved Him, So This Made Him Go & Wonder Why.. She Would Do This, Was He Too Stupid? Or Should He Blame Cupid? Now He's Ruthless, WAIT, Should I Tone It Down? Cause From Now On This Will Be Like A Horror Sound, Let Me Tell Ya'll Exactly How The Horror's Found .. You See He's Plotting The Perfect Revenge, He's Gonna Hurt Her, So She'll Never Hurt Him Again, Cause She'll Be Murdered.! Death In His Eyes, Black Hole For A Heart, Emptied Out His Soul So He Was Cold From The Start. Immune To Her Screams As He Slashes Thru Her Throat, "Who Thought Our Love Would Die? Now It's Just A Ghost." Not Effected By The Blood Bath As He Slices At Her Kidneys, "If You're Gonna Leave Then I'm Taking This With Me." Is What He Said Once He Got To Her Heart, Took His Bat To Her Breast & Started Swinging For The Park... & Just To Think, Love Turned Him So Ruthless, So If You're Gonna Blame Anyone, You Should Blame Cupid. ♥
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Re: Blame Cupid
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th October 2013 @ 01:50:18 AM AEST
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this reads like a notorious cupid/Eros shuffle... a veritable contiguous chaffing-like strife-of gangster love unsustainable
by the forces of/ self hating/ l o v e, it be what they call it, perhaps a deconstruction of someone like the punk head Chris Brown...
Blames it on Cupid, I like that... needs work, but that's what writers got to do... just write it
Peace!
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Re: Blame Cupid
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2013 @ 06:08:44 AM AEST
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| can't read this need to re structure you work for maxamum enjoyment -wasted |
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