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My Greatest Love
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Friday, 18th October 2013 @ 11:46:34 PM in AEST
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No one could ever love you more than I do
I'd do anything to see you happy
No one is better for you than I am
I would be afraid, if anyone tried, that they couldn't love you like I do
They don't know how to care for you
They don't know how to make you smile, like I can
They aren't good enough for you if they aren't me
You are the ocean inside of my head
The warmth in my heart
The pride swelling inside of my chest
Be patient, my love
Be kind
The flow of life may hit us hard sometimes
But in my head it's just you and me sitting in our own little world
The struggle is to keep up with the constant blows
But I know what my future holds
And that's you, dear
I devote myself to you
So there is no need to worry
No need to wonder
I'm handing myself over on a silver platter
Open mind, open soul
I will travel through this life with you by my side
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2013-10-18 23:46:34]
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Re: My Greatest Love
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by shewalksinbeauty on
Saturday, 19th October 2013 @ 10:34:06 PM AEST
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| I really like your use of commas and affectionate terms like 'dear' and 'my love.' Well done. (: |
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Re: My Greatest Love
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by Flex4life13 on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2013 @ 07:01:07 PM AEST
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| Bittersweet as life often carrels us off course, yet it is our job to correct it. |
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Re: My Greatest Love
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 02:02:57 PM AEST
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beautifully sweet, honest and heartwarming,
hugs n' love nessa |
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