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lonely alone
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Tuesday, 15th October 2013 @ 11:06:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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meaningless words
for all to see
there shallow & worthless
to all but me
nobody knows
just what I feel
& only me
would know that it's real
I except all comments
good & bad
for the stories I tell
of the life I had
no doubt I will make it
I still have my home
I've learned to live with
lonely alone
heartfelt expressions
for all to see
I am a poet
with a destiny
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA thehotshotpoet
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thehotshotpoet
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2013-10-15 23:06:11]
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Re: lonely alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eric56 on
Wednesday, 16th October 2013 @ 10:17:42 AM AEST
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| AWSOME! I love the flow! |
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Re: lonely alone
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by CharM on
Wednesday, 16th October 2013 @ 07:07:37 PM AEST
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nicely done....
(a few typos on some words though) |
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Re: lonely alone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th October 2013 @ 10:04:56 PM AEST
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I like that term, lonely alone. Very clever.
Nicely done, Roy.
See ya'
Tim |
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Re: lonely alone
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by ThatGuyNamedDre on
Saturday, 19th October 2013 @ 12:52:21 AM AEST
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| Dope poem, I like the way it flows smoothly, I also like how you used the words "lonely alone". Clever. All in all, dope poem man. |
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Re: lonely alone
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 03:13:06 PM AEST
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beautiful from title to last line,
hugs n' love nessa |
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