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Only then will I
Contributed by
Dagger-of-the-mind
on
Thursday, 10th October 2013 @ 02:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Tell me your emotions let them swirl like sands in the wind.
Tell of how it is to be you, Know i am only human, Unlike you.
Let me in your thoughts, Maby then i will not be distraught.
Let me comfort your sorrow. Feeling your pain.. Might free my chains.
Cry on my shoulder, Because I cannot cry anymore.
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Re: Only then will I
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by Sagefairy on
Friday, 11th October 2013 @ 11:07:22 AM AEST
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| I can relate to the thoughts, although I think it could be expressed more poetically. Do not mistake this for meaning it's not poetic - it takes the rare human to be able to express exactly what is felt. I'm not sure poetry is adequate enough sometimes... Anyway, if you've got to the point where you can't cry anymore - I envy you, 'cause I'm not there yet. Blessings, S. |
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Re: Only then will I
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by gypsymaddness on
Saturday, 12th October 2013 @ 07:52:34 PM AEST
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| This poem sounds darkly romantic yet almost tragic. Really good. |
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