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Only one minute
Contributed by
jusmeotay
on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Delicate night sounds fill the air
Whispering gently here and there
Moon and starts cast a glow
On the words we write-the thoughts that grow
To stop time from moving fast
To take it slow and make it last
This I wish that I could do
For I could-I would share it with you
If I had but only one minute
I would insist that you be in it
Rather than walk this life alone
And miss the half I could have known
So as we talk and type each night
Praying the sun to stay far out of site
That is until, the clock is read
Then Good night, Sweet Dreams, and off to bed
Copyright ©
jusmeotay
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2003-05-17 07:05:00]
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Re: Only one minute
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 10:50:50 AM AEST
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| Hmmm..... I love this work of yours pal. great job! |
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Re: Only one minute
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by JJTiger on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 12:09:51 PM AEST
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| That is beautiful. I can really relate to that. Good job, and keep writing!! |
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Re: Only one minute
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 06:26:30 AM AEST
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| Great poetry ... enjoyed this very much. |
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Re: Only one minute
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by Lone_Cowboy_With_a_Rose on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 12:43:26 AM AEST
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| Do I get in trouble for flirting on here? guess not. Point is- You've got one beautiful heart there-keep writing because I'm enjoying it |
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