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No longer golden.
Contributed by
Flex4life13
on
Tuesday, 1st October 2013 @ 06:57:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Clamor beyond the begotten hills
Where a wicked wizard unsparingly casts spells.
Half hearted laughter rarely escapes our breath
Half lit smiles rise above from such daunting depths.
Those ivories, shimmering pearls
Hold they not a word of promise, lifeless murals.
Retrieve the innocence lost from the harshly planted brush.
Believe in it the most, that of which hurts too much.
Conniving martyr, once so golden,
You too shall wander by the doors which rarely ever open.
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Flex4life13
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2013-10-01 18:57:19]
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Re: No longer golden.
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by Sagefairy on
Thursday, 3rd October 2013 @ 04:32:37 PM AEST
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Not sure I understand the abstraction, but it fits my mood this afternoon absolutely perfectly. Sounds sort of symbolic of meaningless words that were said. Nice work!
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Re: No longer golden.
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 10:49:09 AM AEST
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enchanting, beautifully written and just wonderful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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