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Enigma of the eternity
Contributed by
vrr
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Saturday, 28th September 2013 @ 04:10:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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It's utopian grand
In this world so bland.
It's faces spilled
In this world so frilled.
It's buildings towering
In these orchards flowering.
It's dominating spirits
In the in minds of the wits.
It's the gunning minds
In the backdrop of these finds.
It's the bold indegenous
In the colourful venomous.
And it's me just me
Who is being lived through so free.
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vrr
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2013-09-28 04:10:15]
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Re: Enigma of the eternity
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by ScribereHabeo on
Saturday, 28th September 2013 @ 09:05:36 PM AEST
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I am shaken by this poem, nothing is more
gripping than the beautiful images and
emotions so craftfully placed in this
moving poem. I am literally in tears
Thank you for the read -Z.D |
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Re: Enigma of the eternity
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th September 2013 @ 12:32:24 AM AEST
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It's a road with painted lines down the middle
two lines getting closer and closer perhaps meeting as one somehow, inevitably in the distance... a proof
a picture i in a picture i
holding a picture i
mystical in a thought
free one must be
immeasurable as that is
--- enigma definitely
Thank you for a very nice poem!
Peace!
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Re: Enigma of the eternity
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by Skylar on
Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 11:20:23 PM AEST
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A curious piece . somehow melancholy, but still hopeful. gripping. enormous.
very enjoyable read =)
Skylar -- |
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