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Dead Dreams
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
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Wednesday, 25th September 2013 @ 05:24:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In the night breeze
Fast asleep in peace
With you, entangled
In my dreams
I kiss your lips
My hand on your chest
I can feel your heart beat
Smell your perfumed skin
Like a crisp fall day
The scent is refreshing
I steal from you
A drop of innocence
I ask for you
In all my brilliance
Hold me and whisper
Words of resistance
Pull away
Let me die in peace
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Jyssvw22
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2013-09-25 17:24:07]
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Re: Dead Dreams
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by Skylar on
Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 11:29:49 PM AEST
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I read this over a few times before deciding to comment. there is a sadness in this that, at first is not completely apparent. but it steals breath as it settles in the spaces where the words remain oblique. beautifully and painfully enchanting.
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Re: Dead Dreams
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 1st November 2013 @ 10:56:14 PM AEST
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Life is tough when the dream is better than the reality. This is eloquently written and the ending ties it all in rather nicely.
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