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Doubting You
Contributed by
stalkee
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Monday, 16th September 2013 @ 02:11:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Begging for answers as I falter
Like the wanderer begs for water
Tell me, little darling, how you feel
Got to know that you're for real
'Cause I'm at the corner where present meets past
And I'm scared I'm falling too fast
Ghosts creeping like a bitter wind
Special ones always leave in the end
My past ridden with heartless pretenders
Those cheating, careless dream enders
I'm too young to die alone
With an older man's heart of stone
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stalkee
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2013-09-16 02:11:03]
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Re: Doubting You
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 16th September 2013 @ 07:09:26 AM AEST
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last two lines tied it up beautifully. good write my friend.
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Re: Doubting You
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by Jalo on
Tuesday, 17th September 2013 @ 07:26:22 PM AEST
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| Sorry to hear about, but beautifully written. |
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Re: Doubting You
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 17th September 2013 @ 10:19:46 PM AEST
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sadly written
hang in there..... |
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Re: Doubting You
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 10:42:25 PM AEST
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you were insightful upon your life; an excellent write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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