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Immortal
Contributed by
GloomyBlu
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Wednesday, 4th September 2013 @ 03:50:31 AM in AEST
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insomniac
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always and forever we hear promises abound
the promise of love and togetherness
what does it mean to talk about the end if it never comes?
to live forever is to put off death
to not have an end is to render time worthless
but what about pleasure versus pain
sunshine versus rain
bitter versus sweet
victory versus defeat
this kind of cycle is the one that's never ending
an infinite balance act when you've chosen immortality over oblivion
what would it mean to be pleasured forever?
what is the difference between to exist and to not?
what is to remember what is forgot?
when does infinity sound like the worse choice?
what do words mean when you have infinite voice?
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Re: Immortal
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 11th September 2013 @ 04:38:45 PM AEST
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| Its like you looked into life and found the hidden words that can never be explained. I feel the torture and the promise, and your write put the questions into words. Great write, P. |
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Re: Immortal
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by emystar on
Sunday, 24th November 2013 @ 07:58:08 PM AEST
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thought provoking to say the least.
Awesome.
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