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I looked through your things
Contributed by
Prince
on
Monday, 2nd September 2013 @ 08:04:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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"Gonna be famous one day" you said
as I tapped until I found your site
You are gone now though
I have stolen your notebook
Down in the basement,
where your stuff still sits
My mother just can't seem
to toss it away
Curiousity's said to
kill the cat
Though for this feline
I've found treasure
Your notebook full of poetry
and some here, online
Though I cannot script
poetry too well
As I read your own
I see what I missed
Who you are or
who you were
But now you aren't here
Not anymore
Copyright ©
Prince
... [
2013-09-02 20:04:27]
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Re: I looked through your things
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 3rd September 2013 @ 07:35:18 AM AEST
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A sweet recollection, with a small gain (of insight) against such a profound loss. It seems a truism that we never really know someone until they have left, but I am still surprised by what I learn about people I thought I knew, at their funerals or other farewells.
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Re: I looked through your things
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by MarkMark on
Wednesday, 4th September 2013 @ 10:26:14 PM AEST
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| Very good poem. |
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Re: I looked through your things
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by gypsymaddness on
Thursday, 5th September 2013 @ 08:17:45 PM AEST
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| This poem is filled with sorrow. Im sorry about your dad. Going through this kind of thing is hard and tough and it might always scar you, but you can get through this. Trust me. Best wishes, Prince. |
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