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Little Laura
Contributed by
lilflirt08
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Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Little Little Laura
she said she was sorry
but we all know different
If she really was,
would she have taken that last drink?
would she have gotten in to that car?
would she have fled through that intersection
without a second thought?
well, she did
she took that last drink
she got in to that car
she fled through that intersection
without a second thought?
she did indeed,
and she hit an ongoing car
and in that car
was a young girl
a very young girl
on her way to the prom
all primped up and pretty
ready to go
what was to happen she really didnt know
little little laura
are you really sorry?
can we really forgive you?
for killing an innocent little girl
with an amazing future ahead of her
little little laura
i know i cant forgive you
you killed her
you killed her
you little devil you
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Re: Little Laura
(User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 11:04:53 PM AEST
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| Good piece i like it alot. good job. keep writin. |
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Re: Little Laura
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 11:05:33 PM AEST
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| Good piece i like it alot. good job. keep writin. |
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